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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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Four lines to write, Famous for those, Shedding a thought, Not just blowing it off. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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Kirk T Walker Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 357Liberty, MO |
A defense of your infamous brevity? I don't really like the image of poetry as "shedding a thought" because of the negative and reptilian implications...No, I changed my mind. I think that the more I think about the biological process of shedding (specifically as it applies to snakes) that I do like the image because it poetry is leaving a peice of yourself (a replica of sorts) behind and the poet grows and improves during the process. But "blowing it off" still bothers me a little. Perhaps if the image was more parallel to the image of shedding it would seem better. I like the idea here. Disclaimer: The preceding statement is just my opinion. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Thanks kirk. You always make my day with your comments. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) [This message has been edited by Xeonox (edited 05-09-2001).] |
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