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0 posted 2001-04-25 06:42 PM


After I have paid my debt-

death comes to take me,

finally I can be free-

to live the way I want.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

© Copyright 2001 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
Kirk T Walker
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1 posted 2001-04-25 08:01 PM


Once again, deep but breif.  I couldn't help but notice your default message "Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)"  That quote and this poem seem to be aimed along the same line.

Disclaimer: The preceding statement is just my opinion.


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