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Grilled Cheese Haiku |
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M'Hal Junior Member
since 2001-01-04
Posts 15 |
strands of golden cheese bleeding oil in my mouth insulting the bread |
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dreamer1 12 5 24 Member
since 2000-12-11
Posts 150crossing between |
Hi M'Hal, welcome to Passions and CA. I loved the poem, the bleeding oil bit didn't do much for me except that I don't think I'll ever eat cheese again. YUCK!  Quite cute.  ....peace as a primary objective is dangerous because it implies that we would sacrifice anything for the sake of it.... Robert Kaplan |
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Brad Member Ascendant
since 1999-08-20
Posts 5705Jejudo, South Korea |
Ah, the culinary delight of a grilled cheese sandwich. I enjoyed this but didn't understand the insult to the bread -- they work very well together. I don't know the cheesiness of being in the oil business in order to make some dough? Just an opinion, Brad |
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warmhrt Senior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 1563 |
Wecome, M'Hal... Very different haiku. I didn't understand the insult to the bread thing either, nor the oil, although cheese does have oil...now I'm rambling. I'll just say welcome again, and hope to see more. Kris All change in history, all advance, comes from the nonconformist. If there had been no troublemakers, no dissenters, we would still be living in caves |
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J.L. Humphres Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 201Alabama |
Enjoyed the image. J.L.H. Jason I...I have seen the best minds of my generation... --Allen Ginsberg |
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jbouder Member Elite
since 1999-09-18
Posts 2534Whole Sort Of Genl Mish Mash |
M'Hal: You realize I'm going to be trying to figure out the insult to the bread all afternoon.  Welcome to CA. If you don't offer your intended meaning first, I'll be back later to give it a shot.Jim |
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jbouder Member Elite
since 1999-09-18
Posts 2534Whole Sort Of Genl Mish Mash |
Perhaps the insult was a reminder to the bread that "a man can't live by bread alone". Poor, poor bread. |
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M'Hal Junior Member
since 2001-01-04
Posts 15 |
Thankyou, all. I consider myself welcomed. I was trying to express my favor towards the cheese w/ the insult bit. M'Hal |
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