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Untitled -- I think I hate Hamlet
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Untitled -- I think I hate Hamlet |
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glorybox Junior Member
since 2000-09-17
Posts 26 |
You choose insanity only to forgive unexpected moments of weakness Lecherous, you dream of death Ophelia cries alone in naked pools vexing your lost sanity everday to return Memories haunt your soul escaping into this stage built encore Righteous, your plight is pain intimidating maidens from your play Ghosts are nowhere to be heard, yet you grasp for lines Thespian pity, dramatic fool Gasping for breath, cold kisses Ophelia tears filled the sea Alas, where is the lord? Waiting upstaged for his father King Avenge these sins, inbred sodomy Yelling for Ophelia to bury kisses in death |
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glorybox Junior Member
since 2000-09-17
Posts 26 |
Oh my, I think I posted in the wrong forum. apologies --- amy |
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warmhrt Senior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 1563 |
It's welcome here, although I'm not sure where it belongs. |
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CareBear3 Junior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 39New Hampshire |
Ok well maybe I got it wrong, but maybe not...this is for analysis of your writing right? I thought this piece was VERY intriguing...I loved the title, that was what caught my attention. And if I am correct.....and correct me if I am wrong..you seem to have a sarcastic hate for him because of the way he romanticises things, and creates perfection in odd forms of simplicity. Maybe I read too far into it..or read it completely wrong..but I liked it! : ) "In great moments life seems neither right nor wrong but something greater it seems inevitable" ~Kelley |
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