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Faded Mist (revised )

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2000-10-13 05:07 PM

Listen
hear the silence
of the eerie
hallowed halls.

Heavy footsteps echo
cause theres no one
left to call.

Laughter once
in triumph rang
throughout the happy rooms.

Sunshine touched
each window pain
now nothings left but gloom.

Horror struck
with swiftest hand
two lovers died in vain.

Lost to greed
of evil hearts
whos loves for not
but pain.

But yet in mists
of moon kissed night
her hand upon his heart.

They stroll the halls
of evermore
A love that none can part.

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