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0 posted 2000-09-21 12:09 PM


Unbidden, my thoughts
Coming like raindrops, pouring
Down all around me

Trying to shine bright
Only to be dimmed by the
Next thought that appears

Coming all at once
Once steady, now erratic
Bringing confusion...
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