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JohnDLeclare Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 43 |
Reality The problem of illusion Delusion Collusion With memories not real, Cause problems of confusion contusions Infusion With people not real. The solution Resolution Defusion Of self, into reality, Can destroy The self That I may wish to be. John D LeClare |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
John. I like the theme but not sure how some of the words fit. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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jbouder Member Elite
since 1999-09-18
Posts 2534Whole Sort Of Genl Mish Mash |
John: I had to think a little bit about this one to find an application for what you are saying. The use of the word "contusions" hints at the suppressed memories of abuse. Facing the possibility that such memories might be false runs the risk of shaking the identity of the person contemplating a "resolution" of self to reality. I really cannot think of any other way for "contusions" to fit (this is not to say there are not other ways ... only that I could not think of another way). You may want to clarify the theme a bit. The easiest way to do this, I think, is to work on your title ... give us something to start with. "Reality" is incredibly vague and your descriptions are not particularly vivid. I do like the idea. Thanks for the read. Jim |
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