I never fell in love with you

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I never fell in love with you

Elilas
Junior Member

since 2000-03-15

Posts 20
The Dalles, Oregon, USA

0 posted 2000-07-31 05:21 PM

I never fell in love with you.
I’m not sorry thought,
you see my love for you,
is not an abyss that I would rush into,
with my stead fully galloping.

But my love for you,
is that solid piece of grant that seemed impossible to climb.
I did though,
and with no ropes,
you see my love is so great I risked all.
I risked all because to climb this mountain,
meant to never come down.

I was meet by an angel.
My angel,
with open wings of love.

And don’t you see,
if I had rush in,
my stead at full gallop,
I may have blazed out the other side,
never knowing,
that I had ever really loved.

So my angel don’t be sad,
I love you now more than I did,
that first time I whispered it softly into your ear.

kelli
Junior Member

since 2000-07-31

Posts 10
washington

1 posted 2000-07-31 05:45 PM

Your poem is very good. When you replied to my poem "Because of Him" you told me not to close myself off, well I did for a while but have opend back up to the world. Thanks for what you said and I love your poem.

Elilas
Junior Member

since 2000-03-15

Posts 20
The Dalles, Oregon, USA

2 posted 2000-07-31 05:50 PM

Thanks and if you guy would tell me what you guys though I was trying to say that would be much appreciated. after i get so many I will tell what I ment by this.

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