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JustinEdward
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since 2000-07-31
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0 posted 2000-07-31 01:34 AM


                   LOVE

When you think of love what do you see,

In my heart I want you to see me,

All my life I've waited for your kiss,

But I see now it is just hit and miss,

If only I could tell you the way i am feeling,

My love is a love that needs to be known,

Only to you and to you alone,

You see me standing at a long range distance,

All I want to say is "I Love You", for instense,

The days go by and the years drag on,

But I am still waiting for that one perfect moment,

To declare my love and have the whole world know it,

For me that will take a lot of courage,

So now I say "I Love You", for once, after all!
    
                              
                                - Justin Davis -

© Copyright 2000 JustinEdward - All Rights Reserved
kelli
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since 2000-07-31
Posts 10
washington
1 posted 2000-07-31 02:01 AM


I loved your poem. I am going through that right now. Your poem might just have given me the courage I needed.
Not A Poet
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since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885
Oklahoma, USA
2 posted 2000-07-31 09:47 AM


Hi Justin,

Welcome to CA. Don't have time to say much else right now. But hope to see more from you.

Thanks,
Pete

warmhrt
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since 1999-12-18
Posts 1563

3 posted 2000-07-31 01:02 PM


Hi Justin, and welcome,

Sorry, I don't have much time either, but I would suggest you take a look at the replies to "Untold", by newbieauthor12. My reply would be especially helpful, I think. JMHO

Later,
Kris

the poet's pen...gives to airy nothing
A local habitation and a name ~ Shakespeare



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