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Missing You (Revised)
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Missing You (Revised) |
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m3jay Junior Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 12 |
The clock says its about 11:52, And already Im missing you, I really dont want you to leave, But the more you learn, the more you can achieve. Now its 11:54, and Im missing you twice as much, Missing your sweet and loving touch, I will miss the way your eyes look into mine, Im so sad now 'cause its almost time. I will also miss how crazy you are, And how sometimes with Lauren you would go to far. I will miss the way we would have a conversation without one word said, Our eyes would say what we where thinking in our head, When your are gone, my eyes will no longer be dry, For you, I would lay down my life and die. I will miss your tender heart, how it is oh so sweet, For going along with you, a peice of my heart you will keep. Im gonna miss everything about you, yes its true, Now you know how I truely feel when I say, I love you! |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Sounds like the beginning of a love affair to Me. Those are are exciing and scary times. Hope ths will grow into a lifetime of happiness for You. ~Sash~ |
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Clara Junior Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 21England, but moving to Sweden this year |
*blinks back a tear* This really touched me. It reminded me of how I felt listening to Eagle Eye Cherry with 'Save the Night' the night before my boyfriend had to go back to Sweden. I couldn't put that feeling into words when I tried the next day though, it hurt too much. Well done Clara The quiet English one |
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