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m3jay
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since 2000-06-14
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0 posted 2000-07-20 11:50 PM


The clock says its about 11:52,
And already Im missing you,
I really dont want you to leave,
But the more you learn, the more you can achieve.
Now its 11:54, and Im missing you twice as much,
Missing your sweet and loving touch,
I will miss the way your eyes look into mine,
Im so sad now 'cause its almost time.
I will also miss how crazy you are,
And how sometimes with Lauren you would go to far.
I will miss the way we would have a conversation without one word said,
Our eyes would say what we where thinking in our head,
When your are gone, my eyes will no longer be dry,
For you, I would lay down my life and die.
I will miss your tender heart, how it is oh so sweet,
For going along with you, a peice of my heart you will keep.
Im gonna miss everything about you, yes its true,
Now you know how I truely feel when I say, I love you!

© Copyright 2000 m3jay - All Rights Reserved
sash
Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125

1 posted 2000-07-21 12:26 PM


Sounds like the beginning of a love affair to Me. Those are are exciing and scary times.
Hope ths will grow into a lifetime of happiness for You.

     ~Sash~
  


Clara
Junior Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 21
England, but moving to Sweden this year
2 posted 2000-07-24 11:56 PM


*blinks back a tear*

This really touched me.  It reminded me of how I felt listening to Eagle Eye Cherry with 'Save the Night' the night before my boyfriend had to go back to Sweden.

I couldn't put that feeling into words when I tried the next day though, it hurt too much.

Well done

Clara
The quiet English one

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