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dillon New Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 1 |
The beauty of life's passion found Comes deep from the inner depths of your soul Fear not to walk in the valley of life For in its fertile ground There grows a blossum of great beauty A flower for an angel |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Dillon, Wecome to Passion's. This section of Passion's is where your poems get critically analysed by other members. Let me for-warn you, as a joint "Flower Child," about the crabgrass lovers from GA. Tell me, is your poem a tribute to someone named Sue? If so, she sounds very special. I like your poem, keep up the good work, and again welcome. Bob <>< |
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Elyse Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 414Apex (think raleigh) NC |
hi dillon! welcome to passions. this is a sweet one. although, blossom is spelled like that. really, i cant think of anything else to add. luv Elyse |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Hi Dillon, Just another "Welcome to Passions and CA". This is a good start. Hope to see much more from you. As was pointed out above, your writing can get pretty close scrutiny here, so you might want to carefully check for typos before posting. Welcome again. Pete |
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