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Critical Analysis #1
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rene
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since 2000-04-24
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0 posted 2000-06-18 09:02 PM


bring me out of this forest where
I am bleeding
I am lost
yet you are still receeding

Oh tell me of this hidden town
where trees bear gold

I know this dream
I've already been told

Show me where all secrets lie
and trees crowd in to gaurd the night

bring me out of this forest where
I am bleeding
I am lost
yet you are still receeding

2
Wicked hands
washed in sin
Let them take you
In


[This message has been edited by rene (edited 06-18-2000).]

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