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rainbow_sunflower
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since 2000-06-01
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0 posted 2000-06-02 03:03 AM


            --Irony and Ivory--
The setting is beautifull
I wish i could be
And though the moon is higher
than the sun
The cars are having fun
I wish i could be
Running and chasing the red and green
keys of golden slumbers
He is so extroadinary
Worthy of so much more than me
I'm not so much like him
I wish i could be
Imagine the melancholy and the sadness
infinetly vanishing with eternity
I wish i could be
Defining a yin-yang whiter,
Less balanced in the key of Candyman
I wish i could be

THanks for reading. Any comments or suggestions would be very helpful!

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