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warmhrt Senior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 1563
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I apologize for having two posts now...but one is so very serious and has been critiqued to death, and this one is tongue-in-cheek... is that OK, Brad? I ask you, Tom, if you had ever thought Of using, for a part in your next flick, An "older woman" cast into the plot Of "Mission" number three, as one you'd pick As your love int'rest, in between the scenes When you are superhuman, hanging by One hand (your body toned and tan, so lean) From cliffs or building ledges in the sky? I've never seen a man's face quite so fair, Your eyes, so blue, it has to be contacts, Those biceps always flexed: of course, that hair That falls across your eyes, then is tossed back. To play a love scene, Tom, ahh so sublime, Would be this lady's wish of a lifetime. Kris the poet's pen...gives to airy nothing A local habitation and a name ~ Shakespeare |
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Jana Tovey Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 257USA |
I would also like to see this. I think it's doubtful, though, as good old Tom probably uses leading women like some of us use a mirror. I liked this light look at the man with a mission impossible to achieve / percieve / believe. |
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warmhrt Senior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 1563 |
I like your style, Jana. Thanks for reading and commenting on this look at male vanity and swooning women. I also doubt very much that this will ever happen. Look at Sean Connery...his love interests in films could probably be his grandaughters. Oh, well, we've got more important things to do. Thanks again, Kris the poet's pen...gives to airy nothing A local habitation and a name ~ Shakespeare |
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