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0 posted 2000-05-24 10:57 PM


Walking in a world
where the walls keep moving.
Trying to find my way out,
not knowing how I got in.

Wondering where I am,
and what I'm doing here.
My mind is lost
as darkness surrounds me.

Confused
but never bewildered,
Confused
but never insane,
Confused
trying to figure out this game.

The shadows of the trees
hide the traps that befall us.
The green forest paths
promise us a rich future.

The maze switches again.
Each time it moves,
be prepared to change your direction.
It's just part of the puzzle.

Confused
but not bewildered,
Confused
but not insane,
Confused
figuring out this game.

The only solution that we can find
is deep within us.
When we find our solution,
we'll have the key to open any door.

The doors we open,
can promise fortune and fame.
The roads we choose,
can guarantee love and success.

Confused
and bewildered,
Confused
and insane,
Confused
finally figured out this game.


 P. J. Kotrch
carpe diem
A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love


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