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Farwell Avei

Chico
Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 67

0 posted 2000-04-02 10:20 PM

Farewell Avei!

  I'm moving on,
Leaving you behind.
  Soon you'll be gone;
And out of my mind.
  It won't be easy,
to leave you like this.
  But soon I'll be free,
and rid of this bliss.
  I gave you my love,
yet you weren't phased.
  you just gave me a shove;
And left me dazed.
  My heart would cry;
you would just stand there.
  Can I ask you why,
you didn't seem to care?
  Couldn't you just see,
My love for you?
  It was there publicly,
for all to view.
  Were you so blind;
That you couldn't tell?
  What was on my mind?
Or'd you want me to yell?

  So I'm leaving you Avei!
You've cause me so much strife;
  And you just couldn't see,
That for you I'd give my life.
  But I'll still love you.
as I always did,
  I've just so much to do,
So farewell to you I bid...!

just_another_fe
Member

since 2000-02-05

Posts 483
MICHIGAN

1 posted 2000-04-03 10:22 PM

I am sooooooo happy that you have moved on chico i think this is what is best for you (reading your past poems) one day you will find someone that you will luv as much if not more then her and they will have the same mutuel love for you (((hugz))) good luck to you

Chico
Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 67

2 posted 2000-04-03 10:31 PM

just_another_fe, I appreciate your reply, and I really hope you are right, although right now I don't see how I will ever be able to ever love anyone as much as I love Avei, but you are probably right, I will get over it and be able to forget it, tahnk you.. take care...
CHICO

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