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I'll know.... |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I have never been in love before but this is how I think it should be. I’ll know.... I’ll know when my love comes along..... He’ll look into my eyes and see into my heart. He’ll smile a special smile just for me, We will always be together, never apart. His touch will send a surge of electricity through my soul, I will melt into his soft and tender embrace. My lips with his slender fingers he will trace, So in love will we be. The man of my dreams will never betray me, His love for me will be so real. I won’t ever have to worry about being alone, He will promise me that with a kiss as the seal. His kiss will fill my heart and soul with everlasting joy, We will walk beneath the stars all night. With him everything will seem so right. So in love will we be. I have never been in love before, But I’ll know when everlasting love comes along. He will always be able to make me happy, He will fill my heart with a beautiful song. His love will be my life long pleasure, forever and ever, We’ll dance in the moonlight- dance all night. Into my life he will bring dazzling light. So in love will we be. Forever and ever, till death do us part, I’ll love him with every bit of my heart. So in love will we be. |
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Diana B Member
since 2000-03-10
Posts 97 |
sigh...the perfect dream of love...unfortunately a rarity...appreciate the sincerity in this piece and will leave the critiquing of the form to others more knowledgable |
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