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Best Friends 4 eva

Frenzal_Rhomb
New Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 3

0 posted 1999-08-16 03:23 PM

Dear rosanna
at n e time in your life
in n e kind of strife
when the worlds been unfair
when no 1 seems 2 care
Just know u have a loving friend
some 1 who'll always be there
some 1 2 always hug and whisper secrets in their ear No matter what your problems are no matter how big or small ill always listen and care even if youve been a fool Others may come and go u can always count on me tho i will always b loyal and i hope we will never spoil luv justin

JP
Senior Member

since 1999-05-25

Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

1 posted 1999-08-16 03:47 PM

I'm telling myself that there is a message in here somewhere and that it must be a beautiful message at that. But my goodness. Poetry is the art of language which this peice seems to be sorely lacking.

I honestly feel that i would like to read this again if it was reworked and actual english was used.

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Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
JP

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