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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
Dreamy unapproachable mountians overwhelmed your desire Deadly heights reign in your love Butterflies dance to fragrant silky romances in the night You gracefully fly in torment of the oozing love I am in heaven taking the halo of pain Moving tword you You smile.... |
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Tony Di Bart Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 160Toronto, Canada |
Hey Nikkisweet I read your poem 4 times and I am confused. It sounds like in the first line some one thinks they are below anothers love and then in the second line it sounds like they themselves are to high. Intended paradox or am i confused. Instead of butterflies in the night maybe moths, a better fit maybe? fragrant silky romances, one to many descriptors I do not know maybe I just do not get it. I would love for you to elaborate. Thanks See ya |
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Joanna T. Lopez Junior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 33El Paso, Texas |
Hello Nikki, I too read this peace several times, this says to me someone , perhaps a he, is in search or in conquest of attaining a desireable love but has no luck because of obvious obstacles. I am in heaven taking the halo of pain Moving tword you You smile... this says to me, this person cannot help the he who encounters the obstacles, he must go it alone, but at the end of the line you will be there for him and he smiles when he sees that you are still there for him?? Maybe I am totally off on the interpretation of this piece, I too would love for you to elaborate on this, it's nice, but lol it appears to have much hidden meaning and I am curious as to what hides behind??? Be kind and smile, it's a good day for that! Sincerely, Joanna T. [This message has been edited by Joanna T. Lopez (edited 02-24-2000).] |
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