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Chico
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since 2000-02-10

Posts 67

0 posted 2000-02-10 04:43 PM

Stuck in between

Here I am putting them together.
  Yet hoping they'll break apart.
Hoping they'll stay forever.
  But yet it's breaking my heart.
Hoping they'll be best of friends;
  that they'll be there for each other.
yet hoping it all ends;
  and that their friendship will smother.
Trying to fix problems of theirs.
  Yet hoping they'll get worse.
Taking care of their small little repairs.
  Yet inside me I can't help but curse.
Abandoning my hopes and dreams;
  trying to make theirs come true.
Yet hoping it's not as it seams;
  Cause theres nothing else my heart can do.
Knowing I've done my job;
  As I watch her kiss him.
Yet trying my best to hold in a sob;
  as the anger rises within.
All these feelings you have to the end.
  When your STUCK IN BETWEEN;
A lover and a friend...

[This message has been edited by Chico (edited 02-10-2000).]

Not A Poet
Member Elite

since 1999-11-03

Posts 3885
Oklahoma, USA

1 posted 2000-02-10 05:21 PM

Hi Chico,

And Welcome to Passions and the CA. Sorry I can't stop to give more depth at this time but I wanted to be first to welcome you. You will, no doubt, hear from some of our moderators soon.

Your poem does tell a sad and often told story, my friend. That does seem like a difficult position.

Well, 'till later then.

Pete

What terms shall I find sufficiently simple in their sublimity --
sufficiently sublime in their simplicity --
for the mere enunciation of my theme?
Edgar Allan Poe

merely_a_jester
Member

since 2000-01-14

Posts 67
Arkansas... that's all you get

2 posted 2000-02-10 08:09 PM

welcome to the forum
this is quite the bad situation, but you conveyed the message well
good work
look forward to more of the same in the future

Aspiring to be Gods, if Angels fell,
Aspiring to be Angels, Men rebel;

Alexander Pope

Chico
Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 67

3 posted 2000-02-10 08:27 PM

Hey guys,
Hey thanks for the encouragment. Like you said it is a tough situation, and this is the best way I could explain it, althought this is the shortest poem I have ever written. But I think it is what it needs to get the point across..

)

CHICO

Drucilla
Junior Member

since 2000-02-07

Posts 14

4 posted 2000-02-10 09:23 PM

Chico,

I happen to be in the exact same perdicament! I really like your poem because it so acurately (sorry for the spelling, not my strong point) expressed everything that I have been feeling for the past couple of weeks. Thank you!

Drucilla

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