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Divine Paradox
Junior Member
since 2021-08-03
Posts 44
I'm not from here.

0 posted 2021-08-03 10:56 AM


(I don't actually have any newer poems so I'll just post this song I wrote until I get something going. After all, I find many poems to be simply unsung songs.)


I've been standing here waiting
for time to unfold
mind quietly debating
if I can do this right
before I get old.

I've grow so tired
of fighting all the time
until the well of inspiration
simply runs dry
searching for the answers
for a reason or a rhyme
they say to find your life
that first you must die...


I become so frustrated
at life's endless trials
the honor seems overrated
when weary feet have walked
for mile upon mile.

There's a time of innocence
when laughter can be found
before the weight of endless sorrow
overwhelms the heart
in a time before your dreams
come tumbling to the ground
please, can anybody bring me
back to the start?


They say the garden was lovely
a paradise lost
the gate is hidden now, from me
the way to life is sold
at a terrible cost.

If I could find the key
I'd simply slip away
I would say goodbye to this old life
with no regrets
I'd begin my life brand new
I'd start again today
I know there's hope somewhere
don't bury me, yet...

don't bury me, yet...

don't bury me, yet.


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ebonygirl
Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000
California U.S.A
1 posted 2021-08-03 12:45 PM


Divine Paradox, this is a deep felt song! Each time you sing it out you will be born again. Well done!
Divine Paradox
Junior Member
since 2021-08-03
Posts 44
I'm not from here.
2 posted 2021-08-03 03:58 PM


I'm glad you could feel it

SG

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US
3 posted 2021-08-03 08:50 PM


SG, I liked this soul-searching write..
especially the steadfastness with the close.

Well done..

Sky~

'Excuse me.. while I kiss the sky'
J.H.

Gunslinger
Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 901
TX, USA
4 posted 2021-08-04 12:01 PM


Excellent! I would like to hear you sing it.
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