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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
I would have liked to taste the wine at 2 euros 50 Or the coca at 2 euros 80, Under the yellow and brown barnum, I wish I’d found the intoxication In this fun crowd, drink an Orangina at 2 euros 50, And have a good time Alone in this crowd having fun without knowing why, I wish I could forgive like them To the bad winds that life brings us. |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Yann, I always love the Uniqueness of your writes, & the FRESH way you say it.  Enjoyed.. Sky~ 'Excuse me.. while I kiss the sky' |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks Sky, |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
forgiveness is hard after having to face intolerable pressures...enjoyed your write..it is to the point that could be expanded with examples of how you're looking for forgiveness in a broader poem. |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
forgiveness is hard after having to face intolerable pressures...enjoyed your write, Yann..it is to the point that could be expanded with examples of how you're looking for forgiveness, and/or what there is to forgive, in a broader poem. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks wordwizard for your comment, your words conforted me yann |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Yann, You do have a unique perspective that makes a person think. I enjoy your work very much. ~L |
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