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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
Plane of angles lingers sofa lines a metered wall it picks lengthened shadows eager to rest, one lies pet cat, on space rug, stretches an evening of pauses a watch waits to rewind What an evening brings adjoining daylight, subdued hinted dusk a violet streaked horizon. pauses for reckoning rest runs its course cat back arcs feline moulded an abode of moments measured and forgotten my body, on an earthly axis, has just rotated my mind follows in awe what an evening's shadow brings. There, a moment's notice a pause in essence, in presence from a plane of angles to others, rotated a planetary axis all is reckoned from the oracle on the mount one rests supine and worlds turn out of sight evening pauses minds stretch beyond fervour abode of moments measured, forgotten paused until press restart... The celestial tent circus recorded on tape your angled lines dampened rotated mode of moments their essence presence measured and forgotten paused until restart Obstacles repeat pushed to summits planes of higher angles released into a pause of space, time watch waits to rewind.. what the evening dusk brings. copyrighted on the 7/7/2021 [This message has been edited by wordwizard (07-07-2021 09:47 PM).] |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
wordwizard, "The celestial tent circus".. Loved that line! and I liked the way this Poem darted in & out of shadows & angles, also reference to the cat. A Very cool write.. Enjoyed Sky~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
"Plane of angles" and "restart" and "obstacles repeating"... For a second I was thrown back into the old "Tempest" video game. This was far more elegant though, and much less scary in its presentation. Enjoyable words and imagery. |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
Thank you augustsky and Michael for your words of encouragement! |
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