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Open Poetry #51
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Elgordo
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since 2021-07-29
Posts 7
0 posted 2021-07-29 02:09 PM

Beside the dying light, sat the young and foolish man,
Open fire warm upon his side, lying within the mirthful crackle,
The only sound left too the lad,
As lifes-blood heomoridged from his side,
Was his slow and pained  deathrattle,
Slumped and cold Upon the floor,
Cold ashes within the hearth,
His old unwell grandmama, found him next morn,
with a broken and heavy heart...
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augustsky
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Posts 828
midwest US
1 posted 2021-07-30 11:48 PM

Elgordo, This is Haunting, Rich in 'feel' &
so worth more than one read.

Welcome..will be looking for more from your
pen.

Sky~

'Excuse me.. while I kiss the sky'
J.H.
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