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0 posted 2021-07-04 11:51 PM


The Desert Oasis
By Paul Wilson

The desert never sleeps
Scorching hot in day time
Freezing cold at night
Those that dwell there adapt
In order too survive

Moon and stars illuminate
The night sky
Off in the distance
Howl of a lonely gray wolf
Breaks silence of the night

Daylight awakens a new world
Around desert oasis
As wildlife comes to quench their thirst
Sunlight brings unbearable heat
As darkness again consumes the land

Secrets buried under the sand
Sun bleached bones of those
That never reached their destination
Covered by blowing sand
with their hopes and dreams

Glowing lights from distant city beckon
Fortunes to be made or lost by many
Homeless beg for next meal
Or something more appealing
The price they pay measured in lives

In this desert oasis where some come to hide
To become another lost soul
Walking the streets at night
Looking for that next pot of gold
Following their dreams

Mountains hold tales of buried treasure
Lost by pioneers from beyond the drifting sand
On their way to a better life
Death... worn out backs and calloused hands
The price paid by most

Desert oasis replenished by much needed rain
Bringing renewed life to all
The circle of live repeats itself
As the moon gives hope
To a better time


copy righted  7/4/21

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Paul

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augustsky
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1 posted 2021-07-07 03:13 PM


Poet Paul, Thanks for taking me along
on this journey of the desert, liked your
insight throughout.

Sky~

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2 posted 2021-07-07 09:52 PM


You capture the lonely sands by day that break into life we may not see,  ...in a good prose like form..I have often been attracted to the inhospitable desert lands you convey well Paul.
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3 posted 2021-07-08 05:56 PM


Sky...Thanks for reading and your sweet reply. Just trying to jumpstart my muse...Paul

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4 posted 2021-07-08 05:58 PM


Word Wizard...Glad you could relate to this.
Thanks for taking time to read and reply...Paul

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5 posted 2021-07-09 12:31 PM


beautiful indeed, what a travel trhough the desert, to be remembered, thanks
yann



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6 posted 2021-07-10 03:56 PM


This was beautiful to me Paul in so many ways.  Having spent the better part of the last 11 years working in the desert, I know it well and see much within it... "the cycles of life" you speak of.  The falling of the bodies, bones picked clean by scavengers, then sun bleached over time, until ultimately, they are buried neath the sand.

Some believe it's the strong who survive, and out here there truly is no place for the weak, but time and time again I see survival, if sought, is more a matter of luck or even predestination.

I've seen a man get crushed pinned by a 3ft wide, 80 ft long pipe once when it rolled into a ditch.  And just in case the pipe didn't kill him, the pipe rolling into the ditch broke free a nest of rattle snakes and he was bit 3 times in the face as he lay pinned under the pipe.  The memory still makes me squirm, but that was one lesson I will never forget.  When your time is up, it's up.

The blaring tale falls not in line with the beautiful desert life picture I so want to be the only thing I draw out of your poem...but I see the underlying comparison to our own human existence in everyday life as well.  So much of our life is perspective...and there will always be shorter lives and longer ones. There will always be new faces to learn and ones passed on you've begun to loose the details of.

In the end, all our lives are very, very short truly.  The sun is always parching, and the sand hot and dry... and we don't get very many second chances.  But if, instead of holding precious every moment of life we have, we spend our days focusing on the negatives, or the lacking, we then have made a choice to be accomplice to the misery so many of us choose to use as shelter.  

For me, I have to daily count my blessings to remind myself not to take that role.  It helps God's spring of eternal water replenish my mind and body, and His Word, that is my oasis.  

Beautiful poem.

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7 posted 2021-07-10 08:09 PM


Michael...Thanks so much for reading and your reply. You showed the beauty and the harsh reality of the desert.
I've never been that close to death and hope I never have to see it bas you have.
My son was bitten by a copper head and almost lost his hand, that was scary enough for me.
Take care my friend...Paul


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Paul

[This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (07-10-2021 11:35 PM).]

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8 posted 2021-07-10 11:31 PM


yann...So glad you liked this. Always glad to hear from you. Thanks for reading and your reply...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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