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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2021-07-03 01:21 PM


In loving memory of Dennis Rhoden, 6/11/49-6/16/21

Missing You

I know you are still with me
giving me comfort and love.
The smallest of things
brought you to mind this morning
And then I began to weep.
I was putting my hair in a ponytail,
as I pulled the hair tie tight and twisted it,
I thought about your ponytail.
I started doing it for you.
Eventually you tried to
do it on your own
with much difficulty.
I paid close attention
to how I did it
so I could give you pointers.
You finally got the hang of it.
And that was all it took
for the tears to fall.
I didn’t try to fight them.
You deserved them all.

LGR(C)6/26/21

[This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (07-03-2021 05:29 PM).]

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Gunslinger
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1 posted 2021-07-03 03:48 PM


A beautiful tribute. So sorry for your loss.
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2021-07-03 05:19 PM


Thank you,
I think you're the kind of guy that can appreciate it when a man goes out doing what he loved. He said many times that when his time came he wanted to be on his Harley.
I'm a firm believer that God is with us in the darkest times and will bless us there. I feel so much gratitude for so many kindhearted people who helped transform a tragedy into a tribute to a very special man. I find great comfort in that.  ~L

augustsky
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3 posted 2021-07-03 05:54 PM


(((Lori))) Bless your heart..
those "smallest of things"..so Precious,
a Warm & Beautiful write.

My heartfelt sympathies..

Sky~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
4 posted 2021-07-04 06:32 PM


Thank you Skye,
I appreciate you

Michael
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5 posted 2021-07-11 11:29 AM


The ending here is beautiful Lori.  You are 100% right.  The tears should not be held back, and the precious memories need to be embraced.
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
6 posted 2021-07-12 05:56 AM


Michael,

Dennis didn't want a funeral. We had a Celebration of Life for him instead. Celebrating his life, and the man he was, rather than simply mourning his loss has given me great comfort.   ~L

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