I Hate it When I’m Right

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Open Poetry #50

I Hate it When I’m Right

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2017-11-25 06:41 AM

I hate it when I’m right
about something I’d rather be wrong.
I sense something is about to begin.
Sure enough, here we go again.
My intuition gives me ammunition
to hedge my bet without regret.
You rarely give me cause for concern
a lesson I’ve had to learn
over time.
But worry over you
I truly do.
I can see the mountain you climb.
I can hear your pain
and your fear has my ear
as you struggle for every gain.
Impatience has pushed your frustration
to your limitation.
There is not much I can do
other than continue
to be right about you.

LGR©11/25/17

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

1 posted 2017-11-25 11:25 AM

quote:
"I hate it when I’m right
about something I’d rather be wrong"

***~~~~~~~~~***

"There is not much I can do
other than continue
to be right about you"

Profound 'bookends' to volumes of trials, Miss Lori.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2017-11-25 08:01 PM

Interesting description, Bluesy. I like your perspective. ~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

3 posted 2017-11-25 08:41 PM

Good blues, country/blues lyrics...

Luther did okay with these lyrics and they're no better than your own: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nWAUCVbnDUg

...just bein' Bluesy

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