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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror

0 posted 2017-11-15 12:19 PM



You know, I prefer a 'giggle' to a 'cackle',
but I feel they're essentially the same

And, speaking for myself, I'd rather 'burp' than 'belch',
but again, without a doubt, I know they're just the same

Furniture? In upper echelons, it's ‘divan’, not ‘couch’
but, come on, we both know they’re the same!

Then there's you, Toots. You, 'here' and you, 'not here'
...all these many days, I never noticed the difference


...just bein' Bluesy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2017-11-15 07:49 AM


I hear ya Bluesy,
Some say tomato, some say tomato, some say potato some say potato. It is all the same.
~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
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2 posted 2017-11-15 12:02 PM


Life and love...I can't live without the former or the latter, Lori Rhoden.

...so I "take two", and see who I wake up with in the morning.

Thanks for reading and grasping.

...just bein' Bluesy

Poet In Pink
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3 posted 2017-11-16 04:37 PM


To not notice when a person is here or not is really a sad thing...But I suppose in some circumstances it can be good to ~ Thanks for the write Bluesy     Alana
Bluesy Socrateaser
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4 posted 2017-11-16 05:02 PM


quote:
"To not notice when a person is here or not is really a sad thing"
Thank you so much, Miss Pinky. Therein lies the essence of my poem.

...just bein' Bluesy

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