Open Poetry #50 |
Revelations In A Bathroom Stall...(No romance to be found here Miss Lori...) |
Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
I’m not sure when I first heard the intermittent 'tinkle-rush-tinkle-rush' of an obviously older, frailer, prostrate in the stall next to mine, but I’m certain it was at the movies...yes, that’s for sure And I wondered with just a tinge of reverence in my bladder, how long would it be before I envy the relief I hear, ...in the stall next to mine? So, I finished myself, with a little 'spurt' at the end, and went back to my movie without heeding the omen squeezed from my ureters the foretelling of time’s pace... and my own all too soon need to watch movies at home ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
And I thought my poem was honest. Way to tell it like it is and will be. Gutsy too, as men don't usually talk openly about their plumbing. This was very entertaining. ~L |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Entertaining?...No more than your reply, Lori Rhoden, for which I thank you profusely. The only other observation was that his shoes had no shine. I don't know why I was looking down...you'd think after all this time there'd be no need to aim... ...just bein' Bluesy |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well all righty than..... LOL |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
As one who lives with a tinkle-rush and cleans the toilet, I can assure you it is ALWAYS important to aim. Or better yet, in case your aim declines with your eyesight or you aren't as good in the dark as you think you are... just sit down and save your standing up for the Men's room and the great outdoors. ~L |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
You're a wise woman, Lori Rhoden. It's also quieter in close quarters. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
To Pee or not to Pee that is the question! lol Thanks for the giggle Bluesy Alana |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
You could have used any font, any color, and signed in under any 'nom de plume', and I'd have known it was you, Miss Pinky! Ha! Mant thanks! ...just bein' Bluesy |
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