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Bluesy Socrateaser
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0 posted 2017-11-01 01:00 AM


I’m not sure when I first heard the intermittent

'tinkle-rush-tinkle-rush' of an obviously older,

frailer, prostrate in the stall next to mine,

but I’m certain it was at the movies...yes, that’s for sure

And I wondered with just a tinge of reverence in my bladder,

how long would it be before I envy the relief I hear,

...in the stall next to mine?

So, I finished myself, with a little 'spurt' at the end,

and went back to my movie without heeding the omen squeezed from my ureters

the foretelling of time’s pace... and my own all too soon need to watch movies at home

...just bein' Bluesy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2017-11-01 06:23 AM


And I thought my poem was honest. Way to tell it like it is and will be. Gutsy too, as men don't usually talk openly about their plumbing. This was very entertaining. ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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2 posted 2017-11-01 11:27 AM


Entertaining?...No more than your reply, Lori Rhoden, for which I thank you profusely. The only other observation was that his shoes had no shine.

I don't know why I was looking down...you'd think after all this time there'd be no need to aim...   

...just bein' Bluesy

LeeJ
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3 posted 2017-11-02 11:54 AM


well all righty than.....

LOL


Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2017-11-02 04:19 PM


As one who lives with a tinkle-rush and cleans the toilet, I can assure you it is ALWAYS important to aim. Or better yet, in case your aim declines with your eyesight or you aren't as good in the dark as you think you are... just sit down and save your standing up for the Men's room and the great outdoors. ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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5 posted 2017-11-06 01:29 AM


You're a wise woman, Lori Rhoden. It's also quieter in close quarters.

...just bein' Bluesy

Poet In Pink
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6 posted 2017-11-08 07:36 PM


To Pee or not to Pee that is the question!  lol  Thanks for the giggle Bluesy   Alana
Bluesy Socrateaser
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7 posted 2017-11-08 08:54 PM


You could have used any font, any color, and signed in under any 'nom de plume', and I'd have known it was you, Miss Pinky! Ha!

Mant thanks!

...just bein' Bluesy

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