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Head Is Swimming
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Head Is Swimming |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Head Is Swimming By: Nadia Lockheart 10/29/17 . . Summersaulting, into a Flaming June, at this 3 AM moon... ...we're exalting, unfinished sympathy, in a clear blue rendezvous... ...rolling, in-between some lost language, trolling, hyperspace wielding glockenspiels, flowing, in-between generations, embarking on dream travel, living for tonight... . . . ...oh, my head is swimming, can you feel your bright heart brimming, with oceans of love breathing and glinting, skydiving into a new beginning, oh, my head is, your head is, swimming, mmm mmm mmm... . . . Feels like we are, playing quantum olympics, like the hummingbirds... ...caressing the stars, striving to be more giving, now that I'm blurring my words... . . ...rolling, in-between some lost language, trolling, hyperspace wielding glockenspiels, flowing, in-between generations, embarking on dream travel, living for tonight... . . . ...oh, my head is swimming, can you feel your bright heart brimming, with oceans of love breathing and glinting, skydiving into a new beginning, oh, my head is, your head is, swimming, mmm mmm mmm... . . Let's run away, and plant a tree in the creamfields, and shout to the world, from the top of the ferris wheel, let's run away, and plant a tree in the creamfields, and shout to the world, all that you love and learned to feel... . . ...oh, my head is swimming, can you feel your bright heart brimming, with oceans of love breathing and glinting, skydiving into a new beginning, oh, my head is, your head is, swimming, mmm mmm mmm... . . "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" Mother Teresa |
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psychofemale Junior Member Posts 18 Tennessee |
This reads like a song, I really like it as a fellow songwriter.. nicely done *These evil vultures always win* |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, thanks sooooooooooooooooo much!  I can't share the whole backstory behind this here, but it was directly inspired by this supernatural evening at a Paul Oakenfold rave this past weekend. So it's definitely intended to pay homage to the community! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed...james |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Light & sequential. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
My head is swimming now too. Lovely words and lovely, interesting flow. Well done. "Behind every cloud is another cloud."--Judy Garland [This message has been edited by soul drifter (04-19-2018 01:29 AM).] |
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albertallie New Member Posts 3 |
This is just the work I expect when I hear my singing sparrow! |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Wonderful meter as it skipped down the page. Loved your opening lines! Sky~ ~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~ |
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EvaRoss Junior Member Posts 22 |
Loved the run away and being swept along on your very animated and lively ride |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
wow, you have so many beautiful scenes in this one, like taking the mind on a beautiful cruise...thank you Lee J. |
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albertallie New Member Posts 3 |
ugh how I miss Noah!! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This one makes me smile. It sings. |
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