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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
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In The Mirror

0 posted 2017-10-30 02:40 AM


I will still be here baby, when you come to realize,
my desire to gently soften the truth in all those lies

To be only known to you baby, is what will always keep me here,
to calm your spent emotions and to dry each stinging tear

When you feel a burning passion that fills your wanting soul,
I will still be here my darling, for you to have and hold


...just bein' Bluesy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2017-10-30 05:33 AM


You are on a romantic roll and it looks good on you. You have a silver tongue that pours out honey sweet words. Way to go Bluesy! ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
2 posted 2017-10-30 03:08 PM


I always appreciate your visits and comments, Lori Rhoden.

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
3 posted 2017-10-30 04:19 PM


WoW! There are serious contention within these words soon to be golden oldies.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (10-30-2017 05:03 PM).]

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
4 posted 2017-10-30 07:47 PM


Good to see you back, Jerry...and thanks for your reply.

Much obliged, Sir!

...just bein' Bluesy

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