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Familiar Stranger
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Familiar Stranger |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina 
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I wonder if you've noticed The colors in your eyes, Once such vibrant blue and gold Now resemble greyer skies The lights which used to dance within Have faded over time Your once familiar smile Now a gruesome pantomime So now we stand as strangers And although I search your face The person I remember Is gone, without a trace You're just a lifeless doll A broken, empty shell Another soulless wanderer With a story you can't tell |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Fascinating in its transition of what is seen. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Well done! I can so relate to this!~L |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
everyone has those sad and disappointed moments, the important fact is, don't allow them to dictate who you are. Great truth and poem. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Sad to witness one so broken and empty. Even more so when it's someone we love. Very nice to read you... |
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psychofemale Junior Member Posts 18 Tennessee |
I like this a lot, sounds like sound lyrics! Def. a fav so far! *These evil vultures always win* |
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