Open Poetry #50 |
Empathy |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
* Empathy By: Nadia Lockheart 10/21/17 . . There is beauty beyond ourselves... . . ...made of quirks, perceived flaws, and flash floods... . . ...each person you meet... . . ...is an aspect of yourself, screaming for love... . . . ...humility, has no substitute... . . ...we're all beggars and vagabonds, in these tight times... . . ...but don't you dare be ashamed... . . ...to let your tears, gleam like searchlights... . . . When hospital beds, feel like vacant taxis... ...I want to sit with the broken, cast loose from the moorings... . . ...we're burnt out flames, yearning for ecstasy... ...making perfume of boot camps... ...searching for empathy... . . . Skydiving, between black holes... . . ...burning to inquire, rather than examine... . . ...like attendants, stationed in airport bathrooms... . . ...just wanting to be heard, in the thick of this famine... . . . When hospital beds, feel like vacant taxis... ...I want to sit with the broken, cast loose from the moorings... . . ...we're burnt out flames, yearning for ecstasy... ...making perfume of boot camps... ...searching for empathy... . . . I want to be the person... you needed when you needed help... . . ...we're striving to be the people... ...we needed when we needed help... . . . When hospital beds, feel like vacant taxis... ...I want to sit with the broken, cut loose from the moorings... . . ...we're burnt out flames, yearning for ecstasy... ...making perfume of boot camps... ...searching for empathy... . . . |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
This is a really strong piece! I love your message and the way you chose to deliver it. Great work! ~L |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
The repetition of verse has the feel of a song. Nice structure, well written. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
so good toobe reading you once againmisse being here. late Arrival Jo perry |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
the song sounds of great awareness, sensitivity and a strong yearning for who we are....who we are meant to be....lovely write. |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
So sad, and poignant, and beautiful! |
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psychofemale Junior Member Posts 18 Tennessee |
Really nicely done, I really respect your word choice here |
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