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Eversor New Member Posts 1 |
Her hair changes from night to day Eyes of shooting stars My heart a tear in space and time Sorrow a galaxy away Then from day to night Spider limbs loosely hang The drowning ice of Draconis IV At last, within my sight |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Kind of spacey but very interesting poem. It literally went from light to dark. Welcome to the blue sea. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I enjoyed this. I hope you share more with us. Alison |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
A different spice to the Big Blue Pot! I like it.. then I say way cool! Welcome to the Blue Buffet! Be awesome. Stay awesome. ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Awesome Lori speaks and I concur . . . . . . ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Lovely rendition, of a reunion, of light at the end of a tunnel. |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
So soulful, I love it. |
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psychofemale Junior Member Posts 18 Tennessee |
I didn't really get the ending of this, are you referencing Game of Thrones? If so how does it relate to the beginning stanza (which was my favorite)? Please help me understand this one a little better! Thank you *These evil vultures always win* |
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