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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2017-10-26 02:12 PM


I want to lay in your arms for an afternoon,
just to feel you safe and close to me.
Maybe we’d lay outside on a sunny autumn day
and make shapes in the clouds overhead.
Breathing easy with all worries aside,
we’d make small talk between I love you’s.
Perhaps we would fall into a fit of silly
and laugh until we’re in tears.
We might just fall asleep dreaming
the dreams of lovers and wake up in a cuddle.
I want a little you and me time
with no distractions or time schedules
so we can just be you and me
the way I like us to be.

LGR©10/26/17


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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
1 posted 2017-10-26 02:32 PM


quote:
"I want a little you and me time
with no distractions or time schedules
so we can just be you and me
the way I like us to be"
It's easy to see how you see the "romantic" aspects in so many of the poems of others, Lori Rhoden...because you are one.

Beautifully romantic.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2017-10-26 03:32 PM


Yes I are one for sure, doesn't take much for this ole girl to get misty-eyed over a Hallmark card. ~L
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
3 posted 2017-10-26 04:48 PM


It's so good to read your "worry free" poetry.  This is lovely, Lori.
Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
4 posted 2017-10-26 06:26 PM


Blues,
Oh no doubt about the "worry free". hugs! ~L

psychofemale
Junior Member
Posts 18
Tennessee
5 posted 2017-10-31 08:28 PM


Love this. Something we can all strive towards.

*These evil vultures always win*

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