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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2017-09-05 09:48 AM


The cool of autumn
arose with the morning dew
giving the crisp sweetness
of apples to the day.
A day to dig out sweaters
and fall decorations
of reds and golds.
Time to remember recipes
for sweet hot cider
and to ready the rake
for making mountains
of soon to be falling leaves.
LGRĀ©9/5/17


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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2017-09-05 12:07 PM


And it's abut time, eh, Lori? Yes indeed, bring on the cool days..

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2017-09-05 01:19 PM


Really, August was pretty tame this year but I am still in the mood for warm cozy clothes and stick to your ribs comfort foods. ~L
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2017-09-06 12:00 PM


Very nice...james
Bluesy Socrateaser
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4 posted 2017-09-06 12:50 PM


quote:
"The cool of autumn
arose with the morning dew
giving the crisp sweetness
of apples to the day"
A perfectly lovely poem inside another Lori Rhoden.

"Crispy Sweet".


BTS

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 2017-09-06 07:49 AM


Thanks James! ~L
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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6 posted 2017-09-06 07:52 AM


BTS,
Oh a BOGO poem! How clever of you to have seen that, thanks for pointing it out! ~L

BluesSerenade
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7 posted 2017-09-06 03:33 PM


Love the colors and anticipation of fall.  Very pretty poem Lori.
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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8 posted 2017-09-07 08:06 AM


Thanks Blues,
love hearing from you ~L

Poet In Pink
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9 posted 2017-09-08 02:34 PM


I love Autumn!! You have painted in perfectly Lori Lou   Enjoyed muchers ~ Alana
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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10 posted 2017-09-12 02:56 PM


Thank you Pinkaleaf! I love fall too! I think our styles complement each other and the season. ~L
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