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Winter (Haiku)
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Winter (Haiku) |
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JLHunter Senior Member
since 2006-10-08
Posts 557CA United States |
Winter Frost-singed glass shards Dazzle blind eyes with rainbows Too pure to behold I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Lovely! The prism effect of ice! ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Love this haiku, JL. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
light in a prism, amazing poem, and very beautiful yann |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Mega-pretty! Although haiku is short, your imagery will remain with this reader for a long time. A pleasure to read, J.L. `misce' |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Pleased to meet you JL  A loverly painted Haiku ~ Much enjoyed ~ Alana |
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JLHunter Senior Member
since 2006-10-08
Posts 557CA United States |
Dear Lori Grosser Rhoden, I appreciate the response and the sentiment. Sorry that it took so long. I forgot that this account is linked to an old, mostly unused email account. Anyhow, thanks a bunch! JLHunter I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran |
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JLHunter Senior Member
since 2006-10-08
Posts 557CA United States |
Dear JerryPat2, I appreciate the nice response. Sorry that it took so long. I forgot that this account is linked to an old, mostly unused email account. Thanks for the critique! JLHunter |
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JLHunter Senior Member
since 2006-10-08
Posts 557CA United States |
Hi, 2islander2. Thank you for the very nice comments. As I have been explaining to others, it took so long to respond due to the fact that I forgot that this account is linked to an old, mostly unused email account. Anyhow, thanks again! JLHunter |
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JLHunter Senior Member
since 2006-10-08
Posts 557CA United States |
Hello, 'misce.' That was a very kind response you wrote. It is much appreciated. Even with Haikus, I take my time and try different things. There is more work in my Haikus than some people might believe. Anyhow, sorry for the delayed response. My email on this account is old and unused. I forgot to change it over. Though I kind of like the serenity in that almost empty "Inbox," if you get my meaning. Thank you for the thoughtful comment. JLHunter I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran |
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JLHunter Senior Member
since 2006-10-08
Posts 557CA United States |
Dear Alana "PIP", As in "PIPtalk" Alana? Hahaha. I thought I would poke the bear (or maybe the little kitty?!). In any case, it's just an expression, you know?! Sorry for the delay. My old email is still linked to this old account. I rarely check it. But I'm glad that I did. Thank you for the warm welcome back, I guess, as I have been here for quite a while, but then life and health and terrible things intervene. I do love this site, and that's why I continue to come back. I have quite a bit of work buried in the archives. Well, thanks again! JLHunter I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran |
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