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Shadow Government
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Shadow Government |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
The murky waters are dark and deep, receiving the dead while the people sleep. The shadow government, enamored of power...waits for the newly empowered to meet their fate. Take up the book of destiny and turn the page. Does the great deceiver take the world stage? |
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Cerulean Member Posts 109 |
Beautifully worded poem. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Shakespeare ? would smile, excellent Ida yann |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
what can I say that the above two haven't? Well done, my friend! j |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Marchmadness, I just slipped in for a minute and saw your title, being drawn to your poem immediately. A nice conservation of words said poetically. Nice to read you again. miscellanea |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you, miscellanea, It's nice to be read. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Ida ☆ I like this. A |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Aren't all governments shadowy? ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
Does the great deceiver take the world stage? He does. One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yes, indeed he does.... great write/right |
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