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Poetry from a long long time ago
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Poetry from a long long time ago |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Mangroves of persimmon, soft delicate defined accurate description of beautiful poetry & articulate rhyme Flowing gently, interpretations feel our musical harmony expression & consideration within the love of our classical melody Ask not, but give gentle fruit of the vintage vine unwavering, motionless, peaceful until the end of time There is a place within, where lovers disappear together in happiness joining experiencing, sharing elation & tears Refreshing moments of love, growth, spiritual prosperity & blessings one within our creator, lights our love with fire progressing As a double sunrise in morning's tropical warm isles you, my wonderful love, be alive and always generate your lovely smile Placid in the moments of unseen treasures exceptionally happy when we are together Precious smiles, your touch through and through soft, this place, where we faithfully believe love's enveloping value Entrusted soul, precious intricate and divine our garden's weave you are paramount and a most intricate part of my summer's eve Astounding, profound, your heart & loving understanding two fold our moments shared with each new day expanding I pray happiness in all, which embraces your heart and our God will bestow you His most life-filled articulate art For my love, from you I have appreciated this view an ocean of cloudless skies painted azure blue one of my first poems.... [This message has been edited by LeeJ (07-27-2017 05:51 AM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Throughout each line of this amazing poem is the fulfillment of your inner self. You write with the wisdom of great scholars. I stand by my words. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Lovely, LeeJ. You've got me wondering what my first poems were about. It really was a long time ago for me but I do know they got me thinking about life and love - still thinking I guess. Oh, and i'm sure there'll be no objection to you posting more from your archives. Always enjoy your words. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful flow of poetry...james |
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Cerulean Member Posts 109 |
One of your first poems? Wow, that's impressive for starting out! I love how everyone has their own unique styles of writing poetry. Yours is just so tranquil. It requires slow and careful reading to grasp fully what's being said. Another thing... I like your Constructive Critiques quote, which is visible only when I reply to your poem. Have a nice day. |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Pleased to meet you Lee  From beginning to end this is simply beautiful ~ You've painted such lovely images in my mind ~ Much enjoyed!! Alana |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I think I've probably read most of yours, my friend - if now, definitely my loss, as I've always love to read your works - this is just as beautiful too. j. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Every verse is stunning and could stand alone. As a whole your poem is dreamy, romantic and speaks to the heart in whispers. Your writing is both surreal and serene. |
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