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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Untitled Living under the gun the night has won got caught on the wire and I crossed the fire to see myself burning for you I wrote the song I carried it all along until the moment arrived and I took the dive to see myself drowning in you I loved and I set you apart from this mess I loved and you were my best guess and I loved until emptiness to see myself I can't see myself anymore Living under the thumb the night is done these ashes of desire I crawled through the briars to see myself through and through I loved and I set you apart from this mess I loved and you were my best guess and I loved until loneliness to see myself I wanna see myself once more "Whatever makes you weird is probably your greatest asset"-Joss Whedon |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
SD...Your sentiments a sad and tender yearning ~ This reader felt your words from beginning to end ~ Thank you for sharing ~ Alana  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I wrote the song I carried it all along until the moment arrived and I took the dive to see myself drowning in you ............................... You and your love songs are killing me soul drifter. |
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