Open Poetry #50 |
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When I Recall Her |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
When I Recall Her "It still hurts me, when I miss the good things about her." I could think about my honey for the rest of my life, although I know my past is not my life; yet it is an accumulated part of my life and over all it is a beautiful chapter that I lived in my past. Yes, my life is right now, No, it is not my past, Yet, when I think of the good times me and my sweetheart shared I loved them so much and then I realize how much I miss her personality and those good thoughts can rapidly turn to bad, Yes it does tend to hurt when I miss the good things about her and it makes me feel sad when at those times I recall her. JamesLee for Suzie 6/22/17 Different Drum sung by Linda Ronstadt written by Mike Nesmith "You and I travel to the beat of a different drum Ah can't you tell by the way I run Every time you make eyes at me." |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
So tenderly expressed James ~ It is hard looking back and feeling things in our life that have passed ~ I believe it is good to sometimes visit ~ as long as we don't want to stay there and forget about living and finding new happiness ![]() |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I think most of us have the "recall" of lost loves. Cool poem, James. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Nice one James! ~L |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Introspective and lonely, my friend. Phrased just right. - - - well done!!! much enjoyed j. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
and those good thoughts can rapidly turn to bad, Yes it does tend to hurt when I miss the good things about her rich introspection yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Poet in Pink, Jerry,, Lori, jwesley and 2islander2 for the nice responses...james |
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