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Open Poetry #50

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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2017-01-26 09:06 PM

Harmony of rice fields,
The rice goes out victorious,
The peace is better than the war.

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

1 posted 2017-01-28 03:06 AM

I once had cause to 'wade' in paddies only thinking 'wet' with the least of my conscious thoughts. So much more to ponder over at the time. In other times, I viewed carved and contoured plateaus of rice and saw a beautiful thing.

Your poetry yann, stimulates perspective. Very well crafted.

BTS

...just bein' Bluesy

jjote
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since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2017-01-28 04:03 PM

Another deep one, yann.

The view of rice fields at harvest time is a celebration by itself - after a laborious and manual planting of the seeds (like war, tumultuous) a plentiful bounty of harvested rice, like peace, brings fulfillment.

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2017-01-28 05:48 PM

thanks bluesy, i can understand that rice fields have a different impact on imagination, yours is a touching testimony,
the peace has no price for me

have a good day

yann

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2017-01-28 05:53 PM

thanks jjote, only peace can nurrishing people, i agree with all your words n the quality of the harvests, and the beauty that bring these accomplissements of the human work

thanks for the comment

yann

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