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Open Poetry #50

A breath of time

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2017-01-28 12:45 PM

A breezeway led me to the seaside
a scene exuding calm and sky so blue where
earth seemed to lose its atmosphere

quaint outriggers lined the shore
waiting patiently and guarding the edge
ready to take anyone on a lazy trip
to a short distance away where towering
gigantic rocks nestled close together.

I wondered if I should venture out beyond
a tiny gap between two rocks, even as it
beckoned me to take this adventure.

I closed my eyes. Time breathed into me
carried me into another world, where
gentle creatures of the sea took my hand,
and I floated with them as in a dream -
a charmed existence, my taste of heaven.

@jjote 01/27/2017

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

1 posted 2017-01-28 03:00 AM

It's said that to be bold is to love and to love is to be bold.

Very much enjoyed.

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2017-01-28 09:15 AM

Can't comment any better than did Lori, but I will say that is one stunning photo.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

3 posted 2017-01-29 04:55 AM

Stunning photo and words ~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

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