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sadness of the fruit
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
The cut branches Never grow again, The shadows penetrate The flesh of guavas, The questions remain On the pulp of fruits, It well makes sadden itself. |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Few things in nature recover in a generation of Man. Eventually though, the branches will return and the pulp will be rich and the fruit of the Guavas will nourish and bring happiness back to the trees' cycle. I hope to see that and eat guavas again. I felt better then yann. Splendid poetry. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
hmm..methinks you mean something deeper that what the eye beholds... One interpretation opens up for me..after the flesh of man (body) dies, the soul or spirit (in the pulp) does not cease to exist,but lives on in some other level of existence. Or maybe, I'm getting off from your fruit. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks bluesy for the so clever and may be visionary comment, time of men is different from time of trees, this is essential and important for the solace and cure of our planet, man can't do anything have a nice day yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hi jjote, i weigh more your comment, because, it drives the poem in an exclusive an new meaning, that is more spiritual that my intentions were, this is important for me, l learn with you to have a different point of view on this poem, i have this way really discover the spiritual side of my poem have a good day yann |
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