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Snow dreams
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Snow dreams |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada 
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Snow flurries float quiet and slow gentle stalkers in the night cover brown grass dead in winter cold. Day breaks like a child rubbing his eyes still sleepy unwrapping Santa's gift earth glistens in snowy white sheen. Frosty flakes cling to naked trees spidery webs of silver nature's gems sparkle unabashed under sun's spangle. @jjote 01/25/2017 |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Beautiful scenes captured in your poetry Josefina, one's not entirely unknown to me. The cold, crisp air with a night sky freckled with stars when it's clear. Oh! Canada! Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
These quiet lines are in tune with their subdued descriptive passages, jjote. Beautifully offered and greatly received. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
what a beauty painting you and winter have captured, there is not such scenes in my country, i miss that some days yann |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
Thanks all - nothing to do but breathe in this white splendor. |
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