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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Did you see that ? This man is trying to walk on the beach, He cannot do it, People don’t keep dogs on a leash. Did you see that ? This man try to think of a woman He cannot do it, People don’t keep dogs on a leash. Have you seen ? He can’t do anything He can’t do it People don’t keep dogs on a leash. Did you see that ? This man try to care about his country He can’ do it Did you see that? This man is trying to dream, He can’t do it, people don’t keep dogs on a leash, They bark at dreams, they bark at freedom. |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
This is Interesting Yann, I'm thinking it's a social-commentary write, correct me if I'm wrong. Enjoyed reading you.. Sky~ Sometimes..Miracles are just good people |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks a lot Sky, there is something social, as you write, and there is something personnal, i have trouble with dogs in France, now it can be read like a metaphor anywhere thanks for commenting yann |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Yann...Really liked this. Did you hear the one about the man that said he created the oil & gas industry and then said saved it from ruin? HE DIDN'T " WHAT A DREAMER OR CRAZY MAN...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks Paul, your comment makes me think (of) about lies and dreams,( if i undestood) sometimes there are close enough, this is a pasionnate debate I like what you write, yann |
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