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Trio of Haiku's
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US 
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Trio of Haiku's~ Footprints~ You left silent, as feathered snow through birch trees, one day I will follow Tenderness~ Oh..such a treasured commodity, served silky smooth..chaser of love Melody~ 'Unforgiven' tune strums my heart, stirs my essence, vibrates my soul home ©Augustsky Music from the movie "Unforgiven".'claudia's theme', (one of my favorite piece's, music to read Haikus by  https://youtu.be/z5q5YP9kBuI [This message has been edited by augustsky (07-07-2020 09:23 PM).] |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sky...Enjoyed very much your Haiku's. Thanks for posting and sharing...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Thank you Paul, you are always sweet & supportive. Sky~ Sometimes..Miracles are just good people |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Such a beautiful trio of moments. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
i love these three haikus, and poetical sensations yann |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Pay me no mind. I'm just passing by leaving a long trail of sighs. These are lovely. "How much is real? So much to question |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Thank you much Mz, yann, & Temptress for your read & comments..Haiku's are fun & relaxing for me. Appreciate your thoughts Poet's.. Sky~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Loved all of these. the "one day I will follow" line on your Footprints one really struck within me though. It's hard to bring substance forth in a haiku. You do it well, Sky. Michael |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Thank you Michael, it seems you never quite expect someone you love to just pass away so quick,so silently, (my thoughts anyway) I can't quite explain it..but that's what that verse meant. Sky~ Sometimes..Miracles are just good people |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
very nice view!! |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Charisma, Thanks for stopping by, pleased you liked. Sky~ Sometimes..Miracles are just good people |
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Starmcneil 1955 Member Posts 174 Alberta, Canada |
These are absolutely lovely...sweet and filled with the heart...so much said in so few words |
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