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Not Good at Goodbyes
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Not Good at Goodbyes |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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I’m not so good at goodbyes, especially last ones. So long’s and see ya’s are more my style. Keep it short and sweet without a lot of gush. Too much mush and I’ll just cry. What can I say? I’m just weepy that way. I get to thinking about stuff I should have said. You know what I mean, like thanks for letting me be your friend. I’m going to miss you more than you know. I guess we are never really ready to see someone go. Your head tells you it is just their time but your heart still says no. I believe we will meet again one form or another. If we are only stardust, we’ll still recognize each other. So I will say goodbye to your devastated body and pain. But to your heart and soul I say, I’ll catch you later. LGR(C)5/13/20 |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
The soul is the best part anyway. ♥️ I hope you don't mind the comment of just the thought it brought up. I'm not really the critiquing type unless there are specific questions about specific parts. "Its gonna be alright cause I'm okay with me" |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Temptress, I'm delighted you commented! And I couldn't agree more! ~L |
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Starmcneil 1955 Member Posts 174 Alberta, Canada |
heartrendingly beautiful...I know we will see all those who are gone again...I was very touched by your words and understand |
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