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DarkofNight
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0 posted 2020-03-18 09:29 PM



Whoa be those with a lack of believing
For they will be crushed by what they saw not
When they see war, famine, disease coming
Will realize lost souls fall to earth and rot.

Are these times
Previews to the last of man,
Will all fall,
Curtain call,
Destroying all made by hand,
The fire
Of pyre
Consuming the once living,
Young and old,
Brave and bold,
No longer breath for giving.
Are these times
For standing in the pit's last lines.

Gloom


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Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519

1 posted 2020-03-20 12:14 PM


dark and vivid; its tone and its slow rhythym last long after reading; superb writing, Night of Dark.



Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11
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2 posted 2020-03-20 12:17 PM


dark and vivid; its tone and its slow rhythym last long after reading; superb writing, Night of Dark.



DarkofNight
Junior Member
Posts 13

3 posted 2020-03-20 01:48 PM


Thank you, thank you,
Your kind words are more than just welcomed.

Starmcneil 1955
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Posts 174
Alberta, Canada
4 posted 2020-07-27 01:00 PM


Not the end just a new beginning with His return...very well written
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