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Natures Seduction
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US 
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Natures Seduction~ No longer silent is the night.. Furious Snow Smothering birch & pine, Bursts of glorious light in the heart of it all, Entranced to a tearful stare. Thunder comes galloping to crash the softness. Surrounded by this booming orchestration, this White Force, & as Frightening as it is, it's just as Exhilarating, one wants to wrap themselves inside it, let it take you where it may. Seduced, by Thunder-Snow.. ©Augustsky |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Envious of the thunderstorms you must receive where you are. Having driven coast to coast during the winter and having stayed back east for a while I know it truly doesn't rain in California. Even having seen some spectacular lightning storms back east, I can only imagine what they must be like with snow flurries involved, and how inviting. |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
It is pretty Amazing. Thank you for stopping in Michael. Sky~ Christmas may be a day of feasting,or Prayer, but always will be a day of Remembrance,a day which we think of everything we have ever Loved. ~Augusta Rundell~ [This message has been edited by augustsky (12-05-2019 01:00 AM).] |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
“Thunder comes galloping to crash the softness” Damn. Exquisite writing as always. |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
~ Dear Sky ~ Lovely writing as always ~ When I lived in VA. we used to get our share of thunder snow! Your writing fits the experience perfectly. Much enjoyed Huggerz Alana |
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Gunslinger Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 901TX, USA |
Beautiful tribute to the marvels of nature. and to your tender perceptive heart. Well done. [This message has been edited by Gunslinger (12-06-2019 01:49 AM).] |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Thank you Souls for the endearing reply. Sky~ Christmas may be a day of feasting, |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Pink-Alana..So good to see you back! Thanks for looking in, I see you know exactly what I meant & felt about those thunder-snow-storms. Sky~ Christmas may be a day of feasting, |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Thanks for this Sweet response GsJohn. Sky~ Christmas may be a day of feasting, |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Sky, Thunder snow is rare here. Your graphic rendition is exhilarating! You rock! ~L |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Thanks Lori, yes..it is still considered rare, but seems to be a little more frequent lately. Appreciate your visits always.. Sky~ Christmas may be a day of feasting, |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I think this is my favorite of yours, augustsky. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Haven't seen Thunder-snow, although I've seen many of Nature's Thunder-Blast of one type or another that's had me cowering in the corner down here in S.E.Texas. Must be awesome, just as you've written. Much Enjoyed - Look in the mirror for me, say HI YOU! jimmy |
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